Hi Benji, I really liked your animation. You have put thought into telling a story and carefully creating the characters and props.It made me smile. Are you going to make some more animations? Great work.
Hi Benji, I love your animation. I really think you and Lachie worked hard on this. I like the character, especially the part where he hides in his shell! Just a wee tip, remember the title needs at capital letter at the start of each word.
Hi Benji, I enjoyed watching your animation. I especially liked the way Super Turtle flew around the room. I did find some of the writing hard to read perhaps you could make the font bigger or look at a different colour. I would love to work together on this.
hi Benji that's amazing I relay like the fireworks at the end and you and Lachlan's secret base when he said it is action time and he did a back flip it reminded me when I learnt how to do a back flip.
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Hi Benji, I really liked your animation. You have put thought into telling a story and carefully creating the characters and props.It made me smile. Are you going to make some more animations? Great work.
ReplyDeleteHi Benji, I love your animation. I really think you and Lachie worked hard on this. I like the character, especially the part where he hides in his shell! Just a wee tip, remember the title needs at capital letter at the start of each word.
ReplyDeleteHi Benji, I enjoyed watching your animation. I especially liked the way Super Turtle flew around the room. I did find some of the writing hard to read perhaps you could make the font bigger or look at a different colour. I would love to work together on this.
ReplyDeletehi Benji that's amazing I relay like the fireworks at the end and you and Lachlan's secret base when he said it is action time and he did a back flip it reminded me when I learnt how to do a back flip.
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