Once upon a time there was a man from world 2, He looked like he was 90 old and he didn't look that happy, mabby sad because one of his family member died and he was very very sad. He looked like harry potter because of the weird glasses.
Friday, August 13, 2021
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Hi Benji, Good effort on your quick write! What did you think made the man look sad? Did you notice some expressions in his face? Well done.
ReplyDeleteHi Benji
ReplyDeleteI could picture the man's face and how he was feeling. Remember to use a full stop at the end of your sentences not a comma.